Review Detail of Fraktal in Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

This story is all over the place with no heads or tail. Most of the time we don’t know what’s happening, the relationships between characters are a convoluted mess, and everything is a testament of Beauty, grandeur, dedication and whatnot. All of this seems made to artificially grant the characters, world and plot some unfathomable profoundness. Let me say that it does the opposite. Too much of this makes this story almost a joke with how much the author wants to show us this ‘grand’ work. Author, you should tone it down a bit and stop jumping scenes all around and take your time in unfolding the plot. We don’t need to know everything that’s happening all the time at the same moment. If you want us to see this world as you want us to see it, it has to be subtle and not ‘in your face’. And please, slow down a bit and explain things at a normal pace to give us time to ingest what you want us to. Dropped near chapter 40 at the moment.