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PenalityLv31yr
2023-09-27 22:14

the story is nice, the writing style is great, nothing too overwhelming and immersive enough to keep you reading. One chapter in and it already look s to have a promising story

Return Of The Vengeful Heiress

Light_Breeze
5.0
71 Chs

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Promezus
PromezusLv11

this is my second time reading your novel and it is amazing as your previous work, keep it up...

1yr

Light_Breeze
Light_BreezeAuthor

Don't mind the high stars, I am the writer so of course I am going to ~not~ be so honest with the stars hehe. Anyways here are some words about the novel you might wanna read before going ahead and adding this to your library -1) It has magic elements. The world building is slow yet integrated very frequently in the chapters. If you are looking for the usual fantasy romance without much discussion about the world itself, it might not be your cup of tea.2) The fl starts as a naive and headstrong teen. But she is just 16. So yeah if you feel like she is stupid wait for the character development.3) This novel starts with the before rebirth arc and not after rebirth. Usually in the rebirth novels you will find the fl has already been reborn, but here you have to wait and be patient before the faceslapping chapters drop. That's all for now. Hope you genuinely enjoy the read and if it's not your cup of tea then *sigh*

1yr
MadScythe
MadScytheLv13

Title: Return Of The Vengeful Heiress As I delved into the world of "Return Of The Vengeful Heiress," I was immediately drawn into a narrative that promised to be far from ordinary. This gripping tale by an author who goes by the pen name Light-Breeze. It takes readers on a rollercoaster of emotions, mixing revenge, transformation, and a touch of the supernatural. The story begins with a gripping scene of betrayal and tragedy. An Lanying, the protagonist, is left to burn in a fire by those she trusted most. The setup is emotionally charged, and the author skillfully immerses us in the protagonist's despair. It's a captivating start that immediately piques your curiosity. What sets this story apart is its theme of transformation. An Lanying's resurrection and her resolve to return as someone unrecognizable provide a unique twist. Her character arc promises not just revenge but a complete reinvention of herself. This theme of rebirth and vengeance is the driving force of the plot. One of the notable aspects is the complex relationship between An Lanying and the man who betrayed her. Their interactions are laden with tension, and it's evident that there's more beneath the surface. The author keeps you guessing about their true motivations and the nature of their connection. As the story unfolds, it becomes apparent that forgiveness is not on the table. An Lanying is out for blood, and her determination to make her enemies pay is unwavering. This sets the stage for a series of conflicts and confrontations that promise to be both intense and satisfying for readers who enjoy tales of revenge and justice. "Return Of The Vengeful Heiress" holds the promise of a thrilling journey of transformation, vengeance, and the unraveling of mysteries. Readers can expect a protagonist who evolves from a victim into a formidable force to be reckoned with. The story is likely to explore themes of morality, the consequences of betrayal, and the lengths one can go to seek retribution. In conclusion, "Return Of The Vengeful Heiress" is a promising tale that stands out in its genre. It's a story of empowerment and justice, with a protagonist who refuses to be a victim any longer. As a reader, I'm looking forward to the twists and turns, the moral dilemmas, and the satisfying moments of comeuppance that this story has in store.

1yr
BL_freak378
BL_freak378Lv2

Hi author, I like your book.But I have a reccomendation for you. I think you shuld add more tags because it will be easier us to find its theme. I personally lilove how how synopsis was written. Kind of feel like poetries. Very interesting.Keep up the good work. I would not mimd posting another review later when this has more chapters. ❤

1yr
Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv14

Iv’e always been a fan for this kind of books ever my favs..i like our fl..the synopsis is so catching i had to read..more updates please[img=recommend]

1yr
Dummybeing
DummybeingLv13

Wow, interesting novel! I read all chapters in one go and it was very engaging! Props to the author for writing this great novel! Take my 5 stars! I just need more chapters!!!!

1yr
SPBasilio
SPBasilioLv13

It's great! I could say this, because, I barely read novels where the mc is a female, but still, this one hooked me up on the first chapter, its just that good. Why? The emotions are bursting from the writing, you could feel it vividly, which is very hard to achieve, moreover the conversations and paragraphs flows smoothly when you read it, so thats a thumbs up! Keep it up Author!

1yr
Stardust_Lyrics
Stardust_LyricsLv11

Reveal spoiler

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Odayaka
OdayakaLv14

unique story and quite the character.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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