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Why would you tag your story with anime, Naruto, DC , Marvel etc without going to any of those settings? If it was just a HP story it would be barely readable considering it's your first story. Now we have a story that no one knows where HPverse ends and DC or Marvel begins. Will Thanos come for the Philosopher's stone? Will Martian Manhunter be the DADA teacher?
Reincarnated with JJK Powerset in Harry Potter!
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Yet the MC is just in the beginning of his Hogwarts career. There was no need to tag all these other franchises . Either way I've read the story. It's too childish for me, reading about a young teenager with a teenager's maturity isn't something I'm interested in. If I were you I would tone down the JJK fanboying, delete the incorrect tags, keep the AI usage to a minimum. The AI creates bloated overly wordy sentences that irritate the readers, especially considering your stories target audience is teenagers.
InAnotherWorld:You have to read the synopsis mate. I said we would travel to multiple worlds