Review Detail of VersusLily in Focused Fire (ATLA)

My earlier review was a 1 star because the MC got NTRd, but the author got COMMISSIONED to rewrite it. So here’s my updated review after reading the new new version. It’s better now no cheating and fixed OoC plays. BUT for some reason the author is still fixated on making this a Poly relationship as well as Azula being Bi which honestly makes no sense to me still, other then personal fetish. So if you don’t like Poly or a bi Azula don’t read this fic. I will not be continuing on reading this because I don’t like either of those. I still think the author should add tags for #Poly and #BiFML Good luck for others who’ll still read or will start reading this.