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DaoistFNur0O
DaoistFNur0OLv21yr
2023-09-15 13:13

The story is great and I like the behavior of the main character -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

King of knights on MCU

A_poky1ninja
4.3
163 Chs

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TheVersalStudios
TheVersalStudiosLv1

It's decent but it lacks meaning. The protagonist goes from being a simple girl to an unparalleled killer too quickly, you barely give her background. Which makes her an ordinary Mary Sue. You use the power system of fate but what good is it if you don't even respect it. You literally give him the strength of 500 tons after facing ordinary people! And you put it in parameters e+. That in fate is only 15 times the strength of an ordinary person, you exaggerated too much there. After his first supernatural battle he already has the strength of 1500 tons. You can practically do it to anyone after the first 10 chapters. Too fast and without any emotion since nobody can with her. Except for the writing, which is good, everything else is terrible.

1yr

Greg63636638485746
Greg63636638485746Lv11

Genius translator! He changed the synopsis a bit, making mc a man turned into girl. I really do think that original is just a girl reborn in marvel. Why does it matter? Because now translator can confuse ‘he’ and ‘she’ - nobody will be able to blame him! After all, our mc is a guy and a woman…

1yr
Don_shofer
Don_shoferLv4

This is a review with 20 updated chapters: Even though some sentences don't make sense, it's much better than MTL with all the Chinese propaganda and nonsense sentences that only they understand. I'm also glad you removed sentences like, young master, second generation rich, wang Yang, I hope you continue translating, since I really like the story

1yr
GaryDaSnail
GaryDaSnailLv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Solgalao
SolgalaoLv14

I like the fanfic because it’s unique. Though please fix the dialogue, keep writing your fanfic the way you like it.

1yr
Random_NPC
Random_NPCLv1

Pretty awesome story so far, love the idea of it and the persona of the MC is spot on. Little concerned about the whole roommate thing though.... keep up the great work!!!

1yr
Mi_
Mi_Lv3

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Good_Deus
Good_DeusLv1

Uma boa história, mais falta alguns complementos, mais de resto está bom. Q

1yr
A_poky1ninja
A_poky1ninjaAuthor

Shameless review, I don't need to say anything, I know it's not the best thing you're going to find here but it's a story that I liked. My first language is Spanish so that's the reason why translation is something bad. but it doesn't matter, I'll continue until I finish the story

1yr
Lazy_Fox111
Lazy_Fox111Lv4

It would be nice if you also replace some words and rephrase some paragraphs so that it would make sense. Other than the grammatical mistakes, it's a decent Chinese fic.

1yr
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