Review Detail of ToufiqUlAlam in ARCANE REVERSAL

I think it's not a good thing to run the race of collecting ratings when you have only 6 chapters. This will ruin your chance of getting honest ones. Good things come with patience. First, the paragraphs were huge and you will lose your reader that way. You can mark my word. Yesterday I started reading but the moment I saw big huge paragraphs, I immediately dropped it and moved on. Why? It was at the end of the day, and I was feeling sleepy. How many of your potential readers will still return after a good night's sleep? If they don't come back how would they know how good your story is!! You have a good writing quality. I may have a beef with the size of your paragraphs, but that does not mean that I don't appreciate your storytelling ability. It's GOOD! The story promises a gripping development. I feel the excitement in the air. In recent years, we have seen many movies and dramas like this. Like Divergent series, Under the Dome, Silo, etc. I feel the same vibe from this story...Keep up the good work!! Who know, you can get a movie contract you can pitch it well to an agent!!