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Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv14mthDaz_Art

all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.

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The First Soul (40k)

Matheu_DeWitt

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moh999
moh999Lv6moh999

please continue , no , I order you to continue writing. pretty please with a cherry on top?!!!

Matheu_DeWitt:I've never deleted a review.
Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1Daz_Art

with all the positive reviews this is getting with zero negative ones im suspicious that some stuff is being deleted but ill come back next month to see if it is deleted

Matheu_DeWitt
Matheu_DeWittAuthorMatheu_DeWitt

I've never deleted a review.

PelerinliKeltos
PelerinliKeltosLv4PelerinliKeltos

Indeed, the story doesn't revolve around the main character. However, the story is about what kind of changes a good being is as powerful as the chaos gods can make in the 40k universe. At least that's what I'm reading for.

ProcrastinatiMeem
ProcrastinatiMeemLv4ProcrastinatiMeem

"incredibly good opinion"

Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1Daz_Art

ProcrastinatiMeem:"incredibly good opinion"
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Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1Daz_Art

I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual

ProcrastinatiMeem:"incredibly good opinion"
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ProcrastinatiMeem
ProcrastinatiMeemLv4ProcrastinatiMeem

Sounds like a you problem honestly.

Daz_Art:I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual
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Subsy
SubsyLv12Subsy

Someone can’t handle something different

Daz_Art:I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual
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Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1Daz_Art

its just he doesnt provide a solid arguement and I admit I got heated

Subsy:Someone can’t handle something different
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Subsy
SubsyLv12Subsy

Getting mad doesn’t win a argument bro, kinda makes you lose the argument even if your spitting facts before. The story isn’t for everyone but sometimes a change of pace is good.

Daz_Art:its just he doesnt provide a solid arguement and I admit I got heated
Matheu_DeWitt
Matheu_DeWittAuthorMatheu_DeWitt

Oof, I have to write now

moh999:please continue , no , I order you to continue writing. pretty please with a cherry on top?!!!