Review Detail of NitrogenousBeing in Outclassing the Achievement Junkie

Review from chapter 75ish: So the beginning of the book was hard to get through. Maybe because it was a sequel and I hadn’t read the first book. The affairs of weird op video game people/entities are not very interesting or believable without explanation. It’s like reading a second prologue and most books are better without prologues. So, the OP comes out cringy. Perhaps a more condensed version starting with the MC and his reputation from the knowledgeable perspective of others would have served better. Anyway, once the MC got run over and the story really began, I really enjoyed the book. Sadly I didn’t get very far before the limited free ended. However, I’m a fan the later portion of this novel now. The author is capable of weaving a captivating narrative. Decent flow and excellent technicals.