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EijiSeishuuLv115mth
2024-11-22 17:31

I just read 17 chapters and gave story development 3 stars and the rest 5 stars, because you forced him to change his personality with the force of the storyline and system. I hope you will continue with the initial MC personality because I was thinking "what will happen in the next storyline when fighting your enemy with such a personality and how to respond to the primitive thinking that only the strong can do anything in the cultivator world" so when I see the mc's personality being forced to change little by little it's a bit disappointing but I will try to continue reading this story *I hope there is nothing else that makes me disappointed*

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