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A fanfic that actually changes stuff and doesn't just add an si mc ...................................................................................................

The only thing that's annoying about this ff is Its wonky word spacing and lack of depth in the characters dialogue but other than that its fine.

for me this one of the best fanfic of mha

Great MHA fanfiction has great chapters and give us a new and better izuku ( deku ) just need more updates

Very good. Very very good. The characterization of everyone is great, the general pacing and flow is great, there is much good reason in how things happen and why, good thought. Gud Writing.

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Sere directo, esta historia es una obra maestra (para mi). Es divertida, es bastante realista y tiene un conjunto de temas exelentes como lo es la transformacion de shoto, la expulcion de mineta entre muchas otras

This fic is fire, every character feels alive and u can feel the personality in each one of the characters, which is difficult to do. Also there is a mystery to midorya as you have shown little if not at all of his thought which makes me want to figure out his character as there is a villain tag on this story. Anyway, great story, hope u finish it!!

New review but a great fanfic and I really enjoy his powers