So much potential… wasted because author is too wishy washy to decide from the start what they want to do. Seriously, if it’s a system novel, keep it that way. If you wanted to get rid of the system, say so from the start. And worst of all, stop listening to readers requests for everything. Take the suggestions, if you like them and find a way to incorporate them into the story without dismantling everything you wrote, then do it, otherwise ignore it
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