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Rayan_Ch
Rayan_ChLv310mth
2024-02-04 16:03

Great story with a MC with unique power, the door fruit from one piece, he is using it in a smart way, as well as the MC is the type who actually kill his enemies, i honestly recommend reading it

Marvel: The Dimensional Mercenary

Galaxy_Wonder
4.7
114 Chs

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Galaxy_Wonder
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YESandYES
YESandYESLv4

I haven't read the story yet but reading the synopsis makes me think it's going to be good and I hope it is well okay I'm going to read this now

1yr

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

Author if you are using gpt, you need to use the command "use simpler words" and edit it manually. This story is good but writing is like reading an acedemic paper, very boring and efficient writing style without any subtlely.

10mth
Kancha_T
Kancha_TLv4

I haven't seen the series this story is based on so I genuinely liked what you did with the plot till now. The development of Door-Door fruit which was considered an auxiliary type into something truly dangerous by MC is amazing to see and read. Also the story is dark but that's usually the case for X-Men verse I believe 🤷🏻 The plot is intriguing and the pace is action packed throughout. My only gripe is the grammar! 😫 Sometimes names, and sometimes the sentence themselves are a headache to understand. All in all, a story worth waiting for.

8mth
Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv4

Thanks for the New Marvel Fic. This fic is far better than any System Fic. Author-san PLEASE Add all Marvel-[Avengers,X-Men,Fantastic 4,Inhumans,Spider-Verse,Defenders/Small Time Characters,Eternals,Guardians of the Galaxy,Wakanda,Atlantis etc.] related Movies and TV Shows in this Fic.

1yr
Bobbaaa
BobbaaaLv3

Captivating and enjoyable story but many plotholes. Like, can't max just go to a bank and get some money out or something? i think being mercenary is pointless and he should focus more on improving his abilities. but that's just me. And i also thought with the villain tag that he will be evil, but he's just always saving them mutant. better than them system fanfics tho. So, thank author👍 keep it up!

8mth
jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

Galaxy_Wonder Excellent Fanfic Keep up the Great Work You can do this Marvel fanfic idea after Marvel: The Dimensional Mercenary Jax Maxwell did not intend to be reborn into the MCU. Fortunately, he was given the power of the essence of the human science god as a gift. He decides that becoming a superhero is boring and being a villain sounds thrilling. He will take/modify technology and create serums for him and his women to grow stronger. Harem Maria Stark Leslie Dean Krista Dumont Dorothy Walker Betty Ross Maya Hansen Sarah Lieberman Heather Rand Stacey Yorkes Camila Reyes Eleanor Bishop Susan Bishop Janice Robbins Natasha Romanoff Jane Foster Vanessa Fisk Marci Stahl Julie Barnes Tammy Hattley Matilda Dillard Joy Meechum Alexandra Reid Sharon Carter

6mth
TheCynicalStrayCAt
TheCynicalStrayCAtLv14

a really good premise, story and characters but the writing quality is really bad. grammar mistakes and the words used are weird. it's a pain to read and really hard to understand and I feel like the more I read the worst the writing quality gets.

9mth
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please don't drop it and continue writing

11mth
Benedafic
BenedaficLv13

Really enjoying the plot, very entertained by the development of Door-Door Fruit and relationships! I hope you continue to release more chapters constantly! [img=update][img=recommend][img=More pls]

6mth
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