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Gonzalo_Contreras
Gonzalo_ContrerasLv17mth
2024-10-07 12:37

The story started well but everything goes to waste when he goes to Mars with Kara to terraform it and begins a conquest of Mars and Luwgo of Earth, from there everything went down. The MC proposes a plan and then does something else, then chapters pass without knowing about him so he can read a little about what he will do but it doesn't work out, a good number of people start dying out of nowhere and everything gets horrible 4/10 for the story, I don't recommend it to people looking for something fairly serious to read or to those who read garbage for entertainment

Omnitrix: DC's New Dawn

Zereeo_Ak
4.5
126 Chs

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Zereeo_Ak
Zereeo_AkAuthor

I hope you would give it a try until chap 55, but if you still don't like, Thank you for giving this story a read

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TyrantTron335
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Mc has one he lets his allies know how much power he has, which is not a good thing. Everything is not problem in DC universe

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Zal01
Zal01Lv4

I like the ideas you incorporated with the mc, and his intellectual thinking capacity. He has a broad perspective and for me personally, the way everything plays out is very well constructed. I’m intrigued to c where this story goes, keep it up 👍

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TaoistOfFreedom_
TaoistOfFreedom_Lv2

Man, the title really isn't catchy, but I decided to give it a chance and I was surprised. The novel is very good, especially the character interactions

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P_J_Sch
P_J_SchLv14

This is straight up Fire the way its done and executed are a good change from the norme plus the MC keeps a List of things to do or not to do

1yr
_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv12

I used to scroll past this one all the time because it didn't look interesting enough, now I am just glad I gave it a chance and it is not that bad it will sometime to get used but it worth it at the end

12mth
tsunamimaster
tsunamimasterLv13

great book about 40 chapters into it and enjoying the novel thoroughly thank you author and have a great day :)

4mth
RS_1
RS_1Lv4

it's good i just dont know wher it's going

7mth
SalveYing
SalveYingLv12

I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.

1yr
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