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Review Detail of Loctovia in Transcending Celestials; A Thousand-Year Rebirth

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The story itself shows great promise. The two chapters were enough to pipe my curiosity. However, i think the execution needs a little more work. Notwithstanding this, i think this is a great story. Keep it up author and i look forward to more of this!

Transcending Celestials; A Thousand-Year Rebirth

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I'll definitely work on the execution better, thank you.