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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv11yr
2023-09-14 21:18

This could become such a good pokemon story, but sadly the author's brain is somewhat funny and by that I mean twisted. The interactions between the MC and his pokemon or friendly trainers are great but anytime the author has to set up a battle or conflict everything becomes super cringe and gay.

The hyper fang that shall pierce the heavens (Pokemon SI)

Bor902
4.5
36 Chs

Liked it!

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FangYuan1234
FangYuan1234Lv3

Bro that's one of the highest praises I saw you give a book. Nice

1mth
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I only praise stories that are actually amazing.

FangYuan1234:Bro that's one of the highest praises I saw you give a book. Nice
1mth
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FangYuan1234
FangYuan1234Lv3

Come check mine out if/when you have time (Depthless hunger). I'm curious if it passes 2 stars.

InternetSaint:I only praise stories that are actually amazing.
1mth
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I will try, but I have to say that normally I give SYSTEM stories 1 star without even reading.

FangYuan1234:Come check mine out if/when you have time (Depthless hunger). I'm curious if it passes 2 stars.
1mth
1
FangYuan1234
FangYuan1234Lv3

Good thing I ain't got one of those. The system is fake =))

InternetSaint:I will try, but I have to say that normally I give SYSTEM stories 1 star without even reading.
1mth
InternetSaintBF
InternetSaintBFLv1

Based as usual

InternetSaint:I will try, but I have to say that normally I give SYSTEM stories 1 star without even reading.
1mth
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A clever and humorous twist on Pokémon lore, this story follows Joey, a reincarnated trainer, determined to elevate his Rattata into legendary status. Blending ambition, nostalgia, and charm, it’s a delightful journey for fans of the series.

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ZephyrZero
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I always liked using the 1st normal pokemon you'll encounter in every series.I'll re-rate this after reading more chapters

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David890
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Had fun reading it. First came across another one of your stories, the Video game developer in a cultivation world, and I'm gonna say both of them got me. Like u read something and like it, simple.

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poopdaddy
poopdaddyLv2

Good story, like the progression of the relationships between trainer and pokemon. It's always what gets me, i guess if I didn't like it I'd read something else

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Checked out the authors patreon and he seems to make a living off of this now. DOn't mind waiting as long as it doesn't get abandoned like half the stories here

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