Tbh I feel a bit cringe reviewing my own work, but I gotta say I do enjoy writing this fic and it’s my second comic book one, I think I did better on this one tbh.

I like the concept and character development so far and I hope you keep up the good work

Best DC fic right now on this app. The concept is very original and the story is shaping out to be very realistic. Can't wait for more chapters.

Muy buena historia pero nerfeaste a los viltrumitas demasiado o sea son como los saiyan cuanto más entrenan más fuertes se vuelven a demás hay muchos personajes de invecible que pueden que son más fuertes que superman osea omniman es más rápido i tan fuerte como superman i trahgg es casi seis veces más fuerte que onmiman los viltrumitas cuanto más viejos son más fuertes se vuelven i Nolan solo entreno menos de 19 años de su vida i mira lo fuerte que es i Mark entreno una 20 años en una dimension diferente i casi iguala a su padre

Excellent ff. The plot is interesting and original, the actions of the characters are exciting. At the same time, ff is not overloaded with either a stupid description or stupid illogical behavior of the characters. Compared to most disgusting works, it's divine, I recommend it) But I already feel sorry for Mark, can he have a normal weekend?) And please don't overdo it with the addition of female characters: that would be too caricatured. The Joker was right about the cake, it's better not to overeat.

Great, but two more chapters are missing in a serious week, ideally, and I'm sure that over time this fanfic will go to top. Alalalalalalalalaalalalalaalallalallaallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalallalala

Read out of boredom, stayed because it was interesting and worth continuing to read. Only wish there were more chapters for me to binge and it didn't go so quickly.

honestly, it's better than I expected, it has really good Grammer and good written character interactions. Mc is not stuiped, he also isn't op right from the start.

Pretty good the best invincible x dc, story I’ve read.

Very good fic. taking the break in updates. I'm loving it, in addition to the balance between comedy and fights, in addition to something more realistic. Note English is not my native language.