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FANIRLv31yr
2023-10-06 20:50

Urban stories are not my usual taste, but I found myself drawn in by this story!In terms of character introduction, very detailed and good! Story-wise it's also good, keep it up!Grammar is also very good! 😉However, if I may give advice, for the online story category, each paragraph is too long. Maybe, you can break one paragraph into three parts.

The Return Of The Missing Heir

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Ike_AJ
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[img=update][img=recommend] he is the best

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Kathm16
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The book was captivating, with rich characters and a compelling plot that kept me engaged from start to next chap

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Favi_gold
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I love this book it's so intriguing pls author update more

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Ike_Adjei
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The story is good as well as the writing quality

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Dream_Lord14
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truly a wonderful novel.the great twist and turns.the plot, character development and the world building everything deserves a 5 star rating.although not really a fan of urban novel but this one really differs from the rest.great job author.I don't know why great works like this won't get contracted while some bad novels will be contracted.author San keep up the good work

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