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SovereignOfDarc
SovereignOfDarcLv141yr
2023-09-05 08:42

I feel that so far its a good read , no mistakes that actually really caught my eye, just the Privillage chapters start at like chapter 39 wich is a bummer , but will see in the future , keep up the work.

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Wendell_Woodward
Wendell_WoodwardLv15

What’ the quality like? MTL?

SovereignOfDarc
SovereignOfDarcLv14

For me its at least far better than mtl

Wendell_Woodward:What’ the quality like? MTL?
Woshi_001
Woshi_001Lv3

Harem?

Calyddon
CalyddonLv15

there is a big mistake in the beginning of the novel he is 13 years old and his sister is 5 years older so 18 later in the novel reading it i don't feel that much Time has past appendly he is 15 and I sister is still 18 so bit in consistent

Charles_Wauwia
Charles_WauwiaLv2

Yes found it to so as you have mentioned

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Eternalsylph
EternalsylphLv14

Let's see, but have you seen the man in the title well? Martial king... where do you see romance coming in, do you see your reasoning as logical? If you want, go take a look around the pages incognito, because right now you are so excited that you can't use your mental faculties again. I and a good part of the readers with reading comprehension have been looking for martial cultivation and everything it represents, and where does romance come into play in a novel that is about overcoming the initial standard of living through martial arts?! What do martial arts and romance have to do with each other? You will tell me about the plot of the novel but that is a cheap excuse for people who need to see what is missing in their life in the same way that we see cultivation because deep down we like it, even through the clichés we continue to see these novels because deep down we want cultivation, whether dao or martial arts, we need it, just imagine finding a cultivation manual, many of us would go crazy, now let's focus on the review. What do we have? An older sister of unknown origin, a beautiful maid, a pet, a trash MC and a reincarnated MC murdered by his wife, the story tells itself, this is full of clichés, the problem is that I don't know how the author will stand out from the others. other novels, many turn to the harem sadly, all in general, and few the originals, there is a lot to develop, especially the concept of dao or tao, the biggest regret in the cultivation theme, I already have a lot of text and I cannot express my knowledge but I have only seen in all my years two authors who mostly express this concept, "Er gen" and "I eat tomatoes" those two focus their novel on cultivation and although "Er gen" tends to have a bit of romance at the end of the everything and with dubious harem it is undeniable that in their novels they focus especially on cultivation and dao, if any author seeks to make a name for themselves there are two ways: put fanservice (harem) or be original, I just hope that this author knows what to choose.

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MOONshadow_ · Eastern
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