Review Detail of J_Dracula in Journey to become Omni Lust God

Thanks for your review.But can you please tell me why mehh.. so iIcan improve.

Bro if was like they met have a talk and the mc was not able to see if it was a male or female then it will be like "oh that was something unexpected" but when u write the word father we all imagine a old man and u write they spend time talking and watching movie so a mc should be able to easily know that the habits of a male old man and a lady is different ..the main point was the word FATHER ..

But Father was a name and i also give discription about young person, but you are also right it can be written better or I should have used other name,i will continue trying improve my writing.Thank for the feedback man.

np.but the impression that left after reading the chapter was that father was a old man as the description was not fully stating that father was just a name that his children gave him ..