Nice, can't wait for the next chapter. There's some minor mistakes, but overall it's good. There's room for improvement anyways so I hope you continue your good work.
Azoroth
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Just my opinion though, you probably should add more for your synopsis cuz they sometimes get the readers attention.
Azoroth:k
Daymnson your fic is getting hundreds of view every minute, good luck 🫡
okay bruh