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Cloudee77
Cloudee77Lv21yr
2023-08-24 16:01

It's an intriguing idea, very adventure like, with well spaced development. Would like though if you could develop more in line with more descriptions of the surrounding. It will give your writing more feelings. Loved it.

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thanks i will improve it

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