.... I think you knew what you wanted to have done and written, but you just typed it in and published it without checking what it even sounded like and you were rushing to get it done so it didn't make sense, and things where rushed and slammed together like unfitting puzzle pieces. so this just needs to be rewritten when you have the time to do so and then it'll be fine.
Seth_Eden_5432
Liked it!
LIKEThat's fine, I enjoy the book tho! it's in my library so I know when you'll update, and be here for the rewrite, can't wait to see it when you have time! :)
Seth_Eden_5432:Understood. Might put this on a long hiatus for a bit though.