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The world background is solid but i'd like to see more visual description regarding what the surrounding environment looks like. The character deign is good overall, but I want to know what the characters look like. Story development is awesome, worldbuilding is stellar, and the writing is fun. I've only read the first 3 chapters, but I really recommend this story. From what I've seen it isn't too predictable, but it also isn't incredibly dark or distasteful in a way that would turn some readers off. I think the story is crafted in a manner that can appeal to a range of audiences.