Review Detail of Daoist7KkCzm in Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Well, I'm ready to put 5 stars, but there is one big problem that seems to me really serious. The problem is that the main character is too strong and developing too fast, if it were a story about how not a particularly serious person just develops and looks at all sorts of events from the outside, then I would not see the problems in it, but it seems that the main goal of the main character is to lead his family to prosperity and so on, but at the same time he is in his first year and can already destroy almost the whole Britain