Review Detail of Humbuub in Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

There were some chapters where it seems unedited, when a dialogue is within the same double quotes and it's confusing. There's an entire chapter where MC and Hermione's dialogues were interchanged. Everything else is great, although it would be better if author tune down the MC Hermione ship. It's just not believable and creepy since MC has an adult mind. It's this Hermione, not the full adult we know now.