well this one is a good novel but I like you to make him no to overpowered and look like i am your first reader and thank your the novel by the way
WrittingCabbage
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LIKEThanks for being the first reader to leave a review. I share the sentiment of being overpowered, but I assure you the MC growing does not mean everyone else in the world is useless or just exist to hype up the MC's strength I might edit small portions of the earlier chapters to reflect that. So I hope you can be patient as I continue to learn as I write.
WrittingCabbage:Thanks for being the first reader to leave a review. I share the sentiment of being overpowered, but I assure you the MC growing does not mean everyone else in the world is useless or just exist to hype up the MC's strength I might edit small portions of the earlier chapters to reflect that. So I hope you can be patient as I continue to learn as I write.