Review Detail of RaptorJesus in Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

I really liked this story in the beginning but in the later chapters common sense is just nonexistent. It seems the only way the author can think to give the mc losses is through straight up stupidity. The sister almost getting killed because her and her friends are randomly sent out with no back up. The important mages he captured are taken back because he just transports them with zero protection(why is the control bead still left inside them?), and to try and recover the situation he only sends two dudes? lis just ridiculous man how is everyone in this novel so brain dead.