in general it's a story with a good concept. Instead of taking us to well-known already Konoha the author dared to take us Kirigakure, which makes the fanfic somewhat fresher. The mc has to confront the most cruel village system, so cruel so it can be called only wasteful. The author did good job in describing that bad experience. If there's something wrong about the fanfic it's only that the mc has described relationships almost only with characters presented in Naruto. Back in the academy he had a friend that was expelled. Till now he didn't care enough to look for him. It's like mc is unable to have any friends that aren't from the original
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