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2023-09-03 03:05

good pace and story but it's little unbelievable for 5 year to have this mentally and grit (me looking at my sister's kid) maybe 10 or 11 be better age!? 馃 over all good and recommend a read

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Thanks for the review. Yes, I can understand the maturity of the character who is only 5 years old currently however, it best to remember that he lives in an area surrounded with people who are typically dangerous and so had to grow up with a strong mentality in terms of action.

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