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It’s pretty good but you just gotta work on the grammar.

Love the concept and looking forward to seeing cyberpunk tech mix with marvel tech and where the story goes recommend giving it a read if it doesn't get dropped

I like where you’re going with us.

Super disappointing hes dont nothing but try to get more powerful for no reason as he keeps saying hes not afraid of anyone but maybe some op mutant. He remembers but also dosent remeber MARVEL. He is boring with no connection to anyone but himself. Says he helps people but the only life he saved he did it for a car he wanted. Hes selfish and stupid for not remembering an entire franchise worth a billion dollars from his former world. This is just a guy trying to become poweful his ripperdoc clinic has been closed for like a year by now. This whole thing needs a rewrite and you need to ask yourself where this is supposed to be going.

The writing quality is really bad, I spend most of my time re reading paragraphs in order to decipher what the author is trying to say, I think he'd be better off re writing this in his native language since the terrible grammar really drags this fic down.

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Very good fanfic Keep up good work AND GIVE ME MOAR

been craving an excellent read for a while