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2023-08-27 15:45

the translation is weird there is really no bad grammar but like someone said it feels like a first draft. The pov changes continuously with no warning the dialogue is weird I have trouble knowing when one person finishes talking and someone's else starts and at the end of chapters there is no separation between the authors note and the rest. its not bad just a lot of little things making it a pain to read sometimes. the story is good

Warhammer 40K: I Don’t Want to Be a Tin Can!

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Beautiful rendition. Vulkan shall return!!!

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By the Empepror I have been blessed this day...

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First of all, simply AMAZING I loved every second of this I found that the develment from at weak boy to a tough resistance fighter to a Space marine fighting demons was incredible, but further into the story you hit these small translation errors which can be easily ignored but they are still there.But thanks again for this amazing story of our boy Hades, and i hope we see him again.

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This is just wrong, don’t read this please you will only hurt yourself

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Excellence translation!!!!!!!!!!!! The work is very well done. I enjoy it so much. Thanks for giving me another great fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This story is ridiculously good (Warhammer baby over here). How good is it? Here’s a list of what happened as I essentially 1-shot read through until the latest chapter. 1. Took me around 4-5 days to read this 2. Cut down sleep time to read this masterpiece 3. Missed a due assignment that was worth 20% of my grade 4. Have to rush to study for an upcoming quiz in less than 5 hours Read this people, this book hits harder than the Horus Heresy.

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