This could be good, the terraria in Orario was good so this should also be good, keep it up and ignore readers who tell you not to do stuff without asking for their opinion on it, your story your rules so put steve with anyone or dont at all, but ill keep watching get enough chapters and my 3 stars can easily become 4+ so I start at a neutral 3.5 stars, but do keep it up
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no man it is bad to tell him to ignore them(especially when you are doing the same thing as them by telling him this) he should take everyone's criticisms and ideas now whether he uses them or agrees with them is up to him. But it is pretty hypocritical to tell someone to ignore others opinion when you are giving your own to be heard.
to be human is to be a hypocrite and true, but a lot of authors follow reader suggestions to keep them and end up screwing the story up, if he doesnt want them he should ignore them, but they're the author in their story they're god, they can use idea and suggestions from readers at their leisure AFTER they get like 12-15 chapters and set some stuff in stone
terraria in orario hurt my soul to read. it just felt like it was butchering terraria.
While some of the criticism can be ignored, the others such as his grammar need to be improved upon along with his spelling. But your mostly correct, the grammar and spelling mistake can just be fixed with ChatGPT if you're lazy to do it yourself. If he or she listens to everything then some would be dissatisfied with their stories and give their OWN opinions which the Author would listen too which will start a cycle destroying the story. Of course both grammar and spelling mistakes could just be because his first language isn't English.
