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HumbuubLv41yr
2023-10-25 21:34

There are some minor mistakes in the translations and the chapters are super short. We basically get what if Harry Potter is a K-drama? It kinda feels like that, slow burn with a bunch of slice of life. The MC is naive and too optimistic. He wakes up being tortured, then a buncj of people killed and he still have this Rose-Colored Glasses, that kind of outlook is illogical after all that. It would've been better if Ch 1 was redacted.

Becoming Grindelwald's Descendant and The Next Dark Lord

Scaramousse
3.9
374 Chs

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Zinion
ZinionLv14

As another reviewer has pointed out its Hogwarts: I became the third dark lord, but if you go and read that its only MTL translated were this is properly edited, well its a lot better than the MTl version, I hope the editor releases this quickly as i like this fan fic just can't stand MTLs. As its a fan fic its not like we need to pay stones for it so people need to stop calling its plagiarism, there are plenty of Fanfics that are just edited MTLs, why complain if we have someone willing to edit it for us. Keep up the great work and added to my read list.

1yr

Scaramousse
ScaramousseAuthor

The story feels kinda slow and easy overall as far as I've read it. It had lots of banters between Wentworth and his colleagues, which makes the story feels more light-hearted and easier to follow compared to other HPverse stories. The story focuses more on how Wentworth just want to focus on experiencing the wizarding world fully, while the adults around him have tons of expectation because he has Grindelwald's blood flowing in him. Would just post 2ch/day until it hits 15k wordcount and be back with 1ch/day, Thank you all!

1yr
Nefistoteles
NefistotelesLv13

this is plagiarism the original book Hogwarts: I became the third dark lord It's already finished and you can look it up and read it, which is worth it.

1yr
Imaslapurass
ImaslapurassLv4

This is simply my type of novel so instant 5 star! Lessss goooo!!!

1yr
MaDenHal
MaDenHalLv1

You would find this twist of HPverse in more or less better in the sense of world building! This fanfic took place in a universe where Grindelwald have a descendant himself (our MC). Rather than having a smart or strong MC as far as I've read it, Wentworth would be much more into the type of MC that simply rolls with how the story folds before him. As I said above, the world building in this is probably one of the strongest point. While Wentworth is having a life of his own, the writer doesn't abandon what's happening outside of Hogwarts.

1yr
Toseeb_Qais
Toseeb_QaisLv4

I am confused the tag stated a system but there is no introduction of it?

1yr
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

(3.8/5 stars) The writing is good without any spelling/grammar error. The story itself is mid...good as your first harry potter fanfic but if you've read a few already then you'll find mc naive, especially his fanboy attitue toward hogwarts and dumbledore. This is more like slice of life where mc is there to enjoy the dreamy world of magical Harry Potter he've read, instead of immersing himself in that world as real and planning accordingly. I'm not into dumbledore bashing but i do think he should be dealt with causion instead of thinking of him as magical grand fairy.

1yr
Randm_Intrnet_Dud3
Randm_Intrnet_Dud3Lv13

its literarily a carbon copy of Hogwarts: Toby and his young lady. Everything is literally the same! Same plot, same punchlines down to its grammar. The only difference is that the Mc here is the descendant while the mc of the other story is the "bodyguard" of Grindelwalds descendant (oh yeah, other mc has a better name lol.). Not sure which is the original but if you read any of the two books, you will just basically read the other one.

1yr
DEvz29
DEvz29Lv4

good stuff really enjoying the alliance theme, would personally like him to delve into elemental magic and put a twist on spells using popular anime moves like Hashiramas great forest emergence or aokijis ice age in the future

1yr
Gunts92
Gunts92Lv10

basic mtl, 5 star reviews are buy basic mtl, 5 star reviews are buy basic mtl, 5 star reviews are buy basic mtl, 5 star reviews are buy basic mtl, 5 star reviews are buy

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