Review Detail of Deadly_Healer in The Novel's Fake Protagonist
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my opinion novel isn't worth it maybe it's for others but not for me. you guys can give it a try. First of an entity transmigrate mc who was about die due to accident in his novel and gives him SYSTEM and then mc who wrote his novel not completed it though killed his own protagonist to take his place cuz the mc he wrote was dumb underdog still an innocent person. He definitely didn't deserve death and could even be used in a better way in future but instead of creating his own place in academy and world when he had op system he just killed him. Like yeah a cliche novel with a system where mc is half dumb himself. That's my honest opinion you can read and judge yourself.
The Novel's Fake Protagonist
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Thank you for your honest review. I'm glad that you recognize the main flaw in Jacob's character. You are right, he could have just picked a different skill and made his own place in the academy and controlled the mc from behind the scenes, but his ego wouldn't let him, He wanted to be the mc, he just doesn't want to admit it. He thinks he will be a better mc, that's what lead him to make the choices he made +a lack of empathy, that I thought I portrayed well without saying it in the scene where Alex throws a rock at Jacob because of his empty words. Still thanks for the criticism, If you believe I changed your mind feel free to continue reading.
Skddsk:Thank you for your honest review. I'm glad that you recognize the main flaw in Jacob's character. You are right, he could have just picked a different skill and made his own place in the academy and controlled the mc from behind the scenes, but his ego wouldn't let him, He wanted to be the mc, he just doesn't want to admit it. He thinks he will be a better mc, that's what lead him to make the choices he made +a lack of empathy, that I thought I portrayed well without saying it in the scene where Alex throws a rock at Jacob because of his empty words. Still thanks for the criticism, If you believe I changed your mind feel free to continue reading.
Deadly_Healer:one thing I wanna know will he change in future cuz Jacob needs a lot of character growth or not?