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2024-01-12 19:03

the pacing is to fast causing a lot of relationship development that is needed fell to short causing relationship between different people felt hollow and weak each chapter is also very short. It kinda felt like an outline of the story and needs some meat to make it a great fic. It's a good story maybe even an okayish could've been better though

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Bro, this is harem, is better so.

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