Take Mystique and Emma Frost as wives,............

This story is a great story however they blitz right through it giving him many powers with a good handle over the powers even though they're new but the worst part is the Grammer it starts out fine but is slowly falling apart more and more as you read till its more annoying to read then satisfying sadly

Cool concept... Reminds me of Unscientific Asgardian blah blah, can't remember the rest... Got a lot of potential,I recommend author read that to gain pointers

Just by reading the synopsis, I think it will be an entertaining story that will make it impossible for you not to read it. I hope the story doesn't fall apart and that it is on the good way. good luck

the pacing is to fast causing a lot of relationship development that is needed fell to short causing relationship between different people felt hollow and weak each chapter is also very short. It kinda felt like an outline of the story and needs some meat to make it a great fic. It's a good story maybe even an okayish could've been better though

I'm looking forward to when the MC copies Apocalypse's abilities, he is the strongest pure mutant in the MCU, and by pure means the one who exclusively uses mutant power, Jean has the Phoenix strength which is a cosmic power not a mutant power and This version of Apocalypse doesn't use technology so he is someone who only uses power derived from the X-gene

Good

this is history has potential , continue author !!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend]

Midnight_Wonder Great Fanfic Keep up the great job You can do this Marvel fanfic directly after Marvel: The Gene Collector Marvel: Ultimatrix Reborn into the Marvel universe is not what Jack Crosby had in mind. Fortunately he was given a gift the power of the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and being a villain sounds thrilling. He will use technology and create or modify serums to make him and his women stronger. Harem Melissa Schemmenti Kristin Marie Monica Rappacini Rosalie Octavius Emily Osborn Felicia Hardy Lydia Hardy Venessa Fisk Calypso Medusalith Amaquelin Crystalia Amaquelin Deathbird Lilandra Neramani Emma Frost Selene Gallio Titania Diamondback ( Marvel) Ophelia Sarkissian Susan Storm Ororo Munroe Lucia von Bardas Doris Toomes Gwen Stacy Pepper Potts Helen Cho Maya Hansen Melina Vostokoff Natasha Romanoff Liz Allan Aunt May (MCU) She-Hulk

The answer to the question on what would happen if you were to tie up Sebastian Shaw and then throw him an aquarium is that he would drown because he doesn’t have to power to adapt/evolve based on circumstances he can only absorb energy, store it, and then redirect that energy.