I'm the author, and I think my book is good.

I will be honest here. It is not an easy task to captivate your reader. It takes an unfathomable mastery of words, imagination, and maturity of thoughts. I read only the 1st chapter. But I am confident that the ratings I am giving is honest. 1. plot - 10/10...what? You don't believe me? It was like a commercial TV drama pilot...I am sure this has an amazing future. 2. character design - 10/10...if you don't fall in love with the characters or hate them...the design is not good. But here, I could actually see. Even the Ai image generator worked fine with the description of the ML. 3. The dramatic effect - 10/10...with the wounded woman trying her best to save the baby...oh! It was a heart-rending scene...and when she was buried..when the Man closed her eye lids...I have a ball of emotions foaming up in my throat...I have teary eyes as i write this. 4. Promise of an engaging adventure - 10/10 ... I can foresee the adventure the baby and the man will have to go through, and can't wait to read it... This list can go on... Just because it has long chapter...don't be fooled. You won't even feel the length once you begin...Don't try to push yourself to finish it...just keep reading...You will be transported to that land of fantasy...you Will feel the chill of that Ice-cold country.

The author is very good in imagery. The narration is vivid, giving the readers a solid grasp of the how the story is unfolding. Though some sentences lack commas and periods, it can be edited. Over all, it's a good read! Keep up the good work, author!🌟🌟👏

Reading this feels like trying to watch a movie with your eyes closed, relying on only what the actors are saying to create a mental picture.....Grammar isn't too bad, but the words used make reading become a chore. Not only that, but the events being described are more in a telling fashion. We want to see the characters play out their roles, not the author telling us how the characters play their roles out. While this might not make sense at first glance, you'll understand it soon enough...

I really enjoyed this story!!! The grammar and metaphors are well-written and on point. The novel is packed with a wholesome relationship between Alabaster man and child, as well as action, mystery, and adventure.

The synopsis is catchy and has me wanting to read the whole story. The important thing is the MC which is well developed. I'd advice the author to focus more on clarity. Otherwise, the story is good.

I'll be leaving an honest review.the plotline is good. it wasn't a bad read not gonna lie, but the chapters were quite long. honestly aside the long chapters it was a fun read

The writer is a true talent. I'm already loving but since it only has a few chapter, I'll have to wait a bit before reviewing again. Hope author takes this book down the right path.

I'm telling you, authors' ideas are getting more and more creative by the day. everything about this is magnificent, the writing, the pace, the plot, the world, everything! I love how you add artwork to help readers imagine what they look like. Thank you for that! Great work, and keep writing, you might get somewhere.

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