Item: STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
Rating: 4.2
Author: NIHILA

NIHILALv31yr

2023-09-18 21:26

The author's vivid descriptions and evocative language make this story a must-read, capturing the essence of a love so deep it can't escape a tragic fate.

STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM

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