The storyline is amazing and this story has potential, the problem is the errors in grammar and all that, it ruins the whole thing, that's my honest opinion, please fix it cause it's ruining the story for me.
Lisa_lucy
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thank for the review of my journalist girlfriend, I can't change it now but the new update will be okay
am doing the update tomorrow can you review it and you can tell what you think about the books