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2023-08-13 13:54

The novel beautifully captures the essence of youthful emotions and the ups and downs of navigating high school life. Alex's connection with the stars, serving as his steadfast companions, adds a whimsical touch to the narrative. As a protagonist, Alex is relatable and endearing. His journey from believing in the impossibility of love to finding courage to express his feelings adds depth to his character development. The introduction of Emma Turner, a fellow student, injects a sense of intrigue and excitement. The portrayal of their blossoming connection is both heartwarming and relatable, resonating with readers who've experienced the vulnerability of young love. While the character design and development earn praise, the world background could benefit from further exploration. More vivid descriptions of Oakridge High School and its surroundings could immerse readers more deeply in the setting. In summary, "Under The Star" is a captivating coming-of-age novel that intertwines youthful hope, romance, and the magic of the stars. The relatable characters, engaging writing, and evolving relationships make it an enjoyable read for those who appreciate tales of young love and self-discovery. With room for potential world-building enhancements, this novel holds promise and warmth for readers seeking a heartfelt story.

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