Review Detail of jaymanifesto in Nightshade of Unveiled

Apart from the first chapter, I really enjoyed reading this novel. You’ve improved your writing so far even though your last novel was also good. My only complaint, I guess? Is to limit the prologue to one chapter only, since a long intro can leave the reader carried away or distracted. But I’m a beginner writer, so take my tip with a grain of salt. Overall, the premise is good, I like how everything is shrouded in mystery when I fist read the premise, because I was like, “what is this type of dream?”. So yeah. Five stars for you, since you need some rewards for effort.