Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.

I have high hope, I'm in need of HxH ff and you provide me with one so I hope you do a good job

I understand why many give 1 star; the author made a mistake in the laws of Nen. I'll give an example: is there a Nen user in HxH who doesn't know about the boundaries or oaths that the user can't break? Nothing, even Kurapika, knows that the limitation of one of his Hatsu (Chain Jail) cannot be used other than by members of the Gennei Ryodan; if Kurapika violates the rule, he will die (HxH Episode 47). So in conclusion, there isn't a single Nen user in the entire Hunter X Hunter series who doesn't know a boundary that shouldn't be crossed. Meanwhile, our MC actually violates these limits because he doesn't know, Where is this common sense?

3.6 / 5 I like the story. The OG of the story is pretty interesting even if he is as generic as he could possibly be. My problem with the story is the following: essentially the first 10 chapters are a quick recap of the Hunter exam. Nothing really changes and we get a condensed version focusing almost solely on the OG. It's pretty interesting but nothing special. The author has so many chances to describe fights in details, explain things, expand the world... he just does not do it. A small spoiler here: The MC is a specialist... he of course does the test featuring the glas with water with a leaf on top. Every HXH fan knows: specialists have UNIQUE responses to the test and every time something different happens... so what happens for our mc? We do not now. The author decides to skip it and just writes a 1 liner where the mc says: "so I am a specialist". This type of writing runs like a red thread through the story. It's IMO lazy and boring writing even though the author has a pretty decent plot going for himself. Overall I still like the story and maybe I am just a bit harsher than all those "I like it so 5/5" drones but I feel at this point it may have potential but it also has obvious flaws that stop it from being a top story here.

If you read up to chapter 20, you will know why this deserves 1 star ...........................................................................

The fun of the story got spoiled after Chapter 20 😢[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]

one of the if not the best hxh outhere. Updates are fast!

Começou bem mais aí no penúltimo capítulo o autor cagou em tudo e depois piorou mais ainda tô fora :) ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. .......................................................

Very good not many hxh story's on web novel

Pretty great so far, his hatsu is strong and has the potential to make him op. All in all worth a read 👍