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2023-10-18 10:01

The essence plot and pacing this story contains has a potential to reach heights.But I like the mentality of the MC it just mature like his age not like other novel MC.But the their is just I spelling mistake I got and is "precent" in 3rd chapter and nothing else.The writing is good, but it's slow progression sometimes like explaining his powers.That's all, but I felt nostalgia when I realize that the Mc name is Nexus and he is now a Soul.I was Awe, it is the greatest co-incident and you can check my bio it had something interesting . .

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thanks for the review!, what a coincidence indeed, if the pacing felt a bit slow don't worry it's only in the beginning so make sure to stick with me here

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