Review Detail of Kyatus in The Sovereign of True Immortality

Hello. First off I would like to say that I like this novel. it has a really great concept and cultivation system. But there are a few issues that are holding back this story. One of which is the pretty bad grammar in early chapter. The others is that it is trying to do too many things at once without establishing much of a foundation to understand what is going on. There is a very heavy inspiration in this story from “Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor”. And this inspiration is a good thing. But the author of this story is trying to do something that was shown in FDE without giving us much understanding of the world the characters are currently in and their power levels. This is shown through the main character where he is shown as being much more powerful than anyone else his age but we don’t really have any understanding about his power level despite him being the MC. I just really hope that the other reads this and understands my criticisms and can maybe try to either fix the issues or just try to avoid it in the future. I still really love the concept of the story and will follow it in the future. SPOILER Issue: . . . . Another big issue is that the author constantly switches POV to the characters other selves, future selves, other timelines, ?? And it is extremely confusing to follow especially when the characters are only in the third realm of power.