Review Detail of Joao_Pires in The Sovereign of True Immortality
Review detail
The story is developing really well. Even though it is a cultivation novel, it doesn't have a brain dead MC nor is he a licking dog. __ The realms are well explained but I think the author could add a bit more description to their strenght (like how much weight they can carry, how powerfull are their attacks, how fast).___ The only bad point is the writting errors. They brake the flow and sometimes make difficult to understand the sentence ___ I recomend you to try to use a grammar cheker or ChatGPT (only need to write "correct grammar:", make a paragraph and them paste the whole chapter there) ___ I'm making these spaces because, from about 2 months, the app no longer lets me make paragraphs.
The Sovereign of True Immortality
Nansha
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the romance, there are many romances in this book. However, I cannot find someone that fits his Junior Sister because she had two men, not related by blood but the Oath of the Dao. Yun Haoran had a lover and they are an interesting duo (I think?)
Eternal_Shu:so no romance?đ„ș
Joao_Pires:I read some more chapters and the author already showed how strong are the realms and the difference between them.
GifflarGod:I'm going to start reading but is the romance towards his junior sister? is that the fml?
Nansha:No, it was like the essence of blood Brother and Sister. Their master is like their father.
Nansha:No, it was like the essence of blood Brother and Sister. Their master is like their father.
Nansha:the romance, there are many romances in this book. However, I cannot find someone that fits his Junior Sister because she had two men, not related by blood but the Oath of the Dao. Yun Haoran had a lover and they are an interesting duo (I think?)
