Hey, Author here. I'll be bias and give my book five star. Though I know it worth it. Let dive straight to what to expect from this book. A wise and overpower Mc that will not think with his little brother. Harem. Yes. System. Yes. Mystery. Yes. Revenge. Yes. Worldbuilding with modern invention introduce by the Mc. This is a story where the MC is not going to level up alone, but the whole world will grow stronger with him. A fight not only against the Mc, but the world itself. A story where a mortal planet ascend to the upper realm and dominate other realms with the Mc. With Modern invention and Ancient Techniques; the Mc and the Lotus World dominate the multi universe. Guess, this is all I can say. If you want to find out how everything unravel. Read to find out. Cheers.

I read a lot of the starting off immortal genre, and I came into this story expecting much of the same, but I was wrong. This is a great novel already, and I just made it to the premium section when it began to pick up more traction. It has me hooked and was immediately added to my favorites. If you are looking for a novel to read, then I suggest you pick this one up.

It is a good read until i realised that it is a system story. I dont read system stories but i still leaving behind a good review as it is an interesting story N a good read.

The story harbored a promising premise, but fell short of its potential. While the concept was intriguing, the execution lacked depth across various elements such as character development, kingdom building, and pacing. Although the main character showed promise, the supporting cast remained superficial. Similarly, while glimpses of a well-built kingdom were evident, overall depth was lacking. The storyline felt rushed, denying readers the chance to fully immerse themselves in the plot's intricacies. As the narrative progressed, the initial intrigue waned, leading to a gradual decline in engagement. Overall, while the book had potential, it ultimately failed to live up to it.

don't know anything from how the world works or looks or anything about cultivation and its levels and it jumps from one thing to the other it needs to slow down and give more info about everything and if it did it would be a great novel bit now it's just Ok(chapter30)and sorry english is not my first language

Every chapter don't start where last chapter end and there are many things left to imagine us by ourselves . world building and character design are also so-so . I thought this is good novel but I was wrong beware of fake comments

I loved the idea… the execution not so much.

the current path of the book looks good, even though some chapters are average but the overall flow is good so am I enjoying reading this book till now

good story the world building is kinda unique