It's a beautiful story. It attends to some serious real life issues although based on a fantasy world. The storyline seems very intricate and it promises a lot of interesting things. I hope the novel will rise and shine...and the author will follow through to the end. Cheers author.

Solid writing to be honest . Conversation and dialogue is a plus point because characters really sound and act like normal people unlike other novels. hahahaha

The story has a good plot, with subtle comedic moments. The characters are well thought out and written. looking forwards to future chapters. Overall, good job!

It has its occasional funny moments which I like, then it turns darker in like a split second. Its good that the year where shin was a complete moron was skipped cuz readers might dislike him, anyway, character development good so far. Me likey

The story was interesting with a premise that was nice to read. Though maybe the writing might be improved in terms of narrative as it greatly affects the story but the novel is good on its chapters. Good Job author.

The story flows well and is easy to get into and become hooked on, based on what is shown so far in the first 2 chapters, getting into the emotions of the characters and their beliefs helps keep an open mind about what to expect or imagine in the scenario and how they will progress. Aside from that the world building thus far is well done and I can vividly imagine the world with what has been given so far, aside from that the only thing missing might be some more information about the looks of our MC and his family or a general idea of their living situation but could easily be brought up within the next chapters.