Review Detail of 002_Yuki_Onna in Way Back To Neverland

Okay, this took me a while, to be honest, a few parts of this novel felt not that relatable to me xD. I'm not SAYING IT'S BAD OR ANYTHING. Anyways, let's get into reviewing. Writing quality- The story is quite descriptive, but what I felt was lacking or maybe it's just how the author writes was the 'conversation descriptions'. Okay so, it's just enrapturing to see the descriptions while the convo is going. For example- He put down his tea cup, "You might not be right either, Mr. White" he continued as he clasped his hands, "Blah blah blah" Something like that, which I randomly came up with right now. Other than that I think it was nice. Stable updates- It's 6 chapters per week, that's great. Great work author! Keep fighting... Story Development- It's fast-paced in a good way, Some places there might be times you'll feel ''oh that's way too early or fast'' but it's all for a reason~ Let's go with that. Character Design- It's just the inceptive stage of this novel, so I won't really comment much on the characters because, in these types of novels, we have a lot to discover. World Background- The timeline the author chose is not too medieval but not modern either, that's my favourite timeline, to be honest. I think it's in the 1700s to 1800s if I am not wrong. However, I wonder if they have thematic elements in the story. Great work author~ Keep fighting, you are awesome!