at this moment I realized that I needed to give it up, he evolved for a week, and when he woke up, the comrades of the dead man came and checked if he was breathing, A WEEK LATER, I am amazed at the stupid mistakes the author made at the very beginning of the novel, I’m afraid of what will happen next, so I skip it
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LIKEHonestly pin commenting this for those who think this is a mistake. Oh Daoist Friend, Thank you for the review. But do you think It is a mistake ? I could have edited it then ? Isn't ? Let's just discuss following point then shall we? 1. When his comrade ran he was alive and fighting the monster 2. His friends did not know he died 3. If it takes the week then it could mean the distance of the Elder and the person who died could take week ? Distance cover by adventurer to go there inform the Elder and come back 4. How they will know he died ? he could be alive ? they need to check to identify that ? may be he is just unconscious ? only You (Reader ) and Bong ( MC ) know that he died not they know this. 5. Even a person died in real life Doctor still check it and confirm it that the person really died their is also Postpartum they do too, to find the actual cause of death, time and date. A week have 7 days, for them he could died on 6th day or may be he just died the moment they arrived ? He could be surviving in the cave, healing himself, fighting against monster ? How they would know this that he died the day when he was fighting the monster ?
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