Review Detail of ydoBoN in Marvelous Twist

"I managed to read up to Chapter 10 but lost interest there. It wasn't because of the chapter itself, but rather because I couldn't develop enough interest in the main character. He's supposed to be an intriguing and mysterious guy, but in this story, he comes across as a completely random character with random goals, morality, powers, and backstory. We know nothing about him or his ambitions, and because every aspect of this character is a blank page, it was hard to find him intriguing; instead, I found him boring. The story itself isn't bad; this author usually maintains a high level of writing quality overall. I'm just not a fan of this particular story."